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I don't care much for the cover art, though. It's awfully muted for such a magical story. I probably wouldn't pick the book up at all if I didn't know what it was about.
It doesn't really say anything. It's just sort of brownish. Plus the house is very ordinary. It's not frightening or quaint or inviting or anything really. And the car is the exact color of the house. This is a good way to cut back on color, but not when it's rust colored. There aren't very many rust colored cars.
Additionally, I don't think a college freshman would be wearing clothes like that. Or even cut her hair like that.
And if there was light coming into the house, the windows wouldn't look like that. Unless there were boards over the windows, but that would mean the house was uninhabited which would mean that the bushes and yard would be unkempt.
Yeah, a simple black cover with some sort of shiny text would look better.
And there's no action whatsoever. She's just kinda, "Hey, cat, what up?"
And the shading on the house is nearly disappointingly nonexistent as unicorns. Or dragons. Take your pick.
The color saturation makes me feel like 1) it just rained, 2) I am choking on humidity, 3) there are mosquitoes everywhere.
And the second set of landscaping to the right is just sort of slapped over the house. Like, I can still see the corner of the house peeking out from under it. It doesn't even have to be a picture o her and the house at all. Maybe just a decorative picture of the fairy king/queen or whatever.
But who am I? I don't even know if you're gonna use this on your actual book, or if you're just using it to advertise on DA. And I probably wouldn't even be writing this if the colors, shading, and clothing were reworked.
All things aside, it sounds like a charming book, and I am going to ask my brother if I can buy it on his nook.
If you don't want to wait, you can download a Kindle app...